SuLLyxxx's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Give it Away Now]

Clock Crew what can I say?

I liked it. Simple concept, but good execution. ahh.. clock crew movies... motion tweening at it's best.

LiquorClock responds:

Lollllll, <3.

[Deliverance]

Nice attempt

I don't review much, but as I passed by this movie, I felt I should review it. I liked it. There were MANY flaws, but I see definite potential. Here's my suggestions on how to improve yourself.

-Your art could be improved on. I know you can draw, because of some of the final images I saw.
-More sound, and/or voices. This would make your movie 80% better. I promise.
-Less shape tweening. It's cool on the statue, but you're over-doing it with the guy shape tween.

That's all for now! Keep up the good work.

mchawking responds:

Thanks for the review man. Yeah the drawings did get much better because I got my graphics tablet and used that for the final two scenes. There is also alot of shape tweening because I just learned how to do it and I wanted to get kinda fluent with it.

[Brian's Life (Beta)]

Are you sick or something?

Are you ok man? This movie is fucked up. what the hell made you think osf something like this? i agree with the last review. you must be a retard.

Evil-Andrew responds:

I'm assuming that you are a Godsmack fan from your username--Sully Erna (the singer) and xxx(what he has tattooed on his back. As such, I don't expect you to really comprehend such simplicity. The assumption that I am retarded actually does more damage to yourself and ROBOLARD than it does me. Ignorance is bliss, and you two must be VERY happy...the joys of being unevolved. CRUEL FATE! WHY MUST YOU MOCK ME? WHAT FORBIDDEN BOUNDARY OF THE HEAVENS HAVE I TRANSGRESSED TO DESERVE CLEAR THINKING AND TO NOT BE CONFUSED BY DOOR KNOBS?? Oh, what a world...

-Andrew

[Middle Nowhere-Trial 0.83]

It stunk.

Um... where do I start? the art was bad. you can't draw too well. maybe find another artist to help you out with the artwork, b\c you are decent at flash itself.. the scenes moved to quick, and I hardly caught the plot. And by the way, I do have broadband, but the movie is still 3 megs. my note to you in response to your loader screen is, "learn how to make a preloader," and you dont have to whine about people not having broadband. I mean if YOU were serious about flash movies, you'd know how to make a preloader.. here you can learn how in the tute page of this site: www.flashkit.com

-SuLLy

MurcurySword responds:

Yes, I know about flashkit.com, thankyou. I already found out from another site how to make a preloader because I realized, if I were serious about flash movies, I'd know how to make a preloader... so I found out... I'm thinking of updating this cartoon with a preloader and use the compressed sounds to reduce the size to apease the reviewers. Thank you for the constructive advice though. The next one looks 50 times better than this, has a pre-loader, and is drasticly smaller than this one. I will admit, the plot to this cartoon was a bit hard to follow, but the next one will deffinitly have a more follow-able plot. Expect to see it mid-January 2003.

[Madness Combat]

Excellent work, man

Hey Krinkels! You rock! You got a lot going for you in the whole flash-style fight scenes. Together, we can overcome the XiaoXiao. Nice work, man

Krinkels responds:

But, Xiaoxiao is amazing.